After watching this analysis, i think that myself and Hannah could have quickly explained why some of these techniques were used instead of just stating what they were. I also think that at the beginning of the analysis it could have been quieter because you can hear slight rustling of different materials, if it was quieter it would be more presentable. I think that we both spoke very clearly so that the audience wouldn't struggle to hear us and work well as a team whilst recording and presenting this analysis.
Mine and Lashawna's analysis includes key media terms. I think to improve our analysis we should have explained in detail what these media terms were used for during the media text as this would have filled up some of the silent gaps that we had nothing to say in. I think we should have planned what we were going to say and actually scripted it out properly as we did slip up on some words, this may have been avoided if we had practiced a few more times. There was also quite a few mistakes at the beginning of the clip as we had trouble setting the tools up in order to complete our analysis. Overall I think we completed the task quite well but there is definitely some room for improvements.
After watching this analysis, i think that myself and Hannah could have quickly explained why some of these techniques were used instead of just stating what they were. I also think that at the beginning of the analysis it could have been quieter because you can hear slight rustling of different materials, if it was quieter it would be more presentable. I think that we both spoke very clearly so that the audience wouldn't struggle to hear us and work well as a team whilst recording and presenting this analysis.
ReplyDeleteMine and Lashawna's analysis includes key media terms. I think to improve our analysis we should have explained in detail what these media terms were used for during the media text as this would have filled up some of the silent gaps that we had nothing to say in. I think we should have planned what we were going to say and actually scripted it out properly as we did slip up on some words, this may have been avoided if we had practiced a few more times. There was also quite a few mistakes at the beginning of the clip as we had trouble setting the tools up in order to complete our analysis. Overall I think we completed the task quite well but there is definitely some room for improvements.
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