Monday, 18 November 2013
plan schedule to complete first draft
Tonight and tomorrow in my long break, I'm going to look at my lyrics tonight and all my research and extracts and make relevant notes alongside them linking everything to my 6 main points so it is ready too turn into essay form, i plan to hand this to matt on wednesday at the latest.
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ReplyDeleteYou've backed up your points really well, you've used secondary sources and referring to direct elements of one of your core videos which definitely illustrates your points better.
You've stuck to your topic and not digressed into irrelevant topics meaning that you have at least four main identifiable points.
Need to improve:
Develop some of your points further so that you cover more issues
Correct quotes and add bibliography
Current progress against aspirational grades: Hannah, your aspirational grade is B/C. You achieved Grade C- in your mock (more detailed feedback after half term). Your assessed written work prior to this was generally at Grade D, so you are making good progress - well done. I have also been particularly pleased with your approach to your music video, and the end result is an indication of the hard work you put in. Please make sure that you make any final adjustments to your Research Investigation final version before the deadline of Monday 24th February.
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